Sunday, January 03, 2010

Promised Land

pit stopped near
Promised Land
driving home
to Franklin
in and out of
snow showers


What is a sherku?


Note: this is a new layout for sherku. I am deliberately deviating from the haiku-like origin of three lines and shifting to the more American 3-4 syllable phrase and running five lines to still reach 19 syllables overall. I'll acknowledge William Carlos Williams work as a key source for this change.




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